ok, you can clearly play guitar so 1 star for that (even if you're inflicting an assault of hitherto unknown force on the strings and hit quite a few wrong notes)
dude it might be a style I don't get but I swear you're just basically shouting
it hurt man
also maybe turn down the overall compression, it sounds way over compressed. also the guitar could do with some shine, try some soft eqing and an exciter
also the stereofields freaking tiny add some verb or some modulation to the guitar or summat
also the song got really really repetitive, maybe try just switching it up and generally being less self indulgent